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Tuesday 31 July 2018

Thursday 26 July 2018

story

The first thing that happens:   Liam was in his room getting ready for bed and suddenly the chair was shaking ? what do you do?

A)Go to  the annoying ghost on the chair  B) don’t to the annoying ghosty go back to bed

The ghost goes  comes into the room and Liam could see him on the chair that he wanted to come to the annoying Ghost. What do you do?

The next morning the Ghost tried to make friends with Liam but liam was happy to be friends with a ghost.

That morning Liam didn’t made friends with the Ghost so he just went back to sleep.

When Liam was still sleeping he let the Ghost creep up on him so that he is not frightened but really brave

When Liam recognized the Ghost he straight away ran down stairs to make loud noises until the Ghost went away.

Liam let the Ghost chase him around the house everywhere that he made a mess but he actually didn't know.

Liam run on the stairs and yelled so hard that the ghost could ran away and never come back, while he was yelling he was happy that he could have a good night sleep from stop the ghost for only 2 days.





choose your own story plan

summariser

Wednesday 25 July 2018

Tuesday 24 July 2018

weather conditions

this is about what make,hails wind,thunder,clear clouds and rain

JACK STORY

JACK AMAZING STORY

Once upon a time in far away forest in a little rusty cabin lived a little boy named jack he was about 17 years old with a amazing personality which was filled with helpful feelings towards everyone even bullies he didn’t care.

So jack was actually living by himself but he could manage taking care of himself he was tough and brave, one story that he always thinks about was his parents his parent he had a big heart towards them they were like angels to him he loved them with all his heart but one day when he was 10 years old his parent had actually go into a car crash a really bad one that was not really good they actually got really bad pains inside their body they had a lot of broken bone they had no time to go to the hospital and get help they were past as soon as they crash.
Jack hate’s thinking about his parent it gives him nightmare and he is 17 years old now but he was actually 10 years old when he had to start looking after him but he also could manage himself even though he was 10 years old.

One boiling day jack thought of going for a walk inside the woods. He wanted to get some fresh air just for a moment so he can get his head though of all that thinking about his parents.
As jack was continued to stroll down the woods he could hear someone screaming really badly and look like they needed help so he yell back to get direction where they were “WHERE ARE YOU!?” shouted jack he got a reponseed and it sounded like a girl so he ran where her voice was coming from.
He was rushing so badly he stop for a break and a lucky break he stop where the girl was and the best part was for jack was she was kind of his age but 16 years old that what she told him he,he was making goo goo eyes at her as she was stick to underneath a tree”ARE YOU GOING TO HELP ME?!”she yelled in pain “ok what your name?”
“Hmm my name is janie” “what a nice name my name is jack” “ ok nice to know can you help me” so jack tried to look and call for help she was losing her oxygen in her body as she  underneath the tree.

So he tried to find help but it was not used so he tried to to get the tree off.
He counted to 3 to get ready janie was falling a sleep and that somethings is a bad sign.
So he left up the tree and left above his head feeling like his parent help him and they did in his amazing life he tucked the tree away from janie and she was lighting up and that was a good sign she was breathing fine and she was walking fine too and she was ok and amazing.
Janie could talk to “thank you so much i own you so badly” “your welcome” “ i should give you something you want, so what do you want?” “ hmm a kiss” “ ok” really “ yeah” so janie and jack kiss then something happen jack fanited before he could kiss janie so janie walk off as soon as he fainted haha she was funny.

Monday 23 July 2018

the weathers are made of what ?

this is the 3 weather and they are temperature, moisture and air pressure.

layers in the atmosphere

theses are the 5 layers in the atmosphere troposphere and that is where we are on the ground and planes fly in that layer too, stratosphere planes also planes fly in that layer too, mesosphere, thermosphere satellites only and exosphere and comets and asteroids

Sunday 22 July 2018

a good day becoming a bad day

One sunny day there were three little kids and  there was two lovely girls named luci and london and they had a little brother, a little ant named johnny and they called him john for short. They lived in a little village with their parent john and sarah the best parents ever.

John, london and luci were really lovely kids they loved to help people in anyway because they loving and lived to be kind and helpful mostly were  they got that from, from there amazing parent john and sarah they had the in mind to they loved to help people they were angels they tswere heaven that is on earth right now there kids loved and hearted  them some much they were the best parents in the world. One day the kids parent had to go to this big meeting for there work they needed a job for the food and clothes to pay for so they had to go they there parent ask the kids if”can you guys managed? And look after yourself ” there father asked “ of course we can managed” replied luci so john and sarah rush off.

The kids did know what to do so they just called some friends maybe around 2 friends for a little talk but it wasn't a talk it was something much bigger… they invited there wholes friends to there house they we actually wild and crazy kids like they need to go to the zoo to be teached your not a animals but maybe they are. So john, luci and london was so shocked they didn't know what to do for the party so they just dance and you know what and made a mess as the kids london, john and luci they knew it was getting out of hand as they lost their fun they actually told the kids to leave but the kids didn't accept to leave so the conited to dance and make a big big big mess. As london is panicking luci has a idea why they are making a big mess so fast it because they were around like 5 to 6 what a big blow they knew that it was a good day becoming a bad day. So they thinked “what should we do? What should we do?” they questioned themself they were pancing so badly.


John was just a little ant but he knew what he could do he actually go all the candy he could find in his stack which had a lot of lollies a lot so he grab a sack to put the lollies in and said to all the crazy “ look i have lollies, do you want some? If you want some come and catch me” he shouted at the kids for them to hear, they chase him down the road where they were no near the house so he drop they bag and ran and the kids didn't care they were stuck to the lollies  john thinks about the kids “their going to have a sugar rush “ john laughed . so he ran back house with smile on his face he needed to give up his lollies before mommy comes because everytime they do something bad the the parent always look in the rooms and see what they can take away for a week he couldn't of go in trouble for having lollies but he gave away so no way he can get in trouble for that.



“THANKS JOHN”said london and luci
“Your welcome guys”
So they justed clean up the house real fast before the meeting finished and then complete the mission and all they did was sleep all day and the parents came back from the meeting and they saw there angels so the decided to have a sleep as well from there long day but they didn’t know how their kids long day with hahaha.
THE END



Tuesday 3 July 2018

sister to help




Brainstorm of ideas - two people having a walk in the woods and hiking



Describing character/setting - short hair yellow and pink shirts running shoes



Ideas for the problem - one of them get stuck under a big brunch



Ideas for the solution - the sister went to get help



Start here:  on the weekends on one lovely day in the hot boiling sun there were lovely two woman strolling through the woods their names were lucy and jenny they had another sister penny but she had things to do on the weekends



First as they entered the clear happy amazed woods in hampton that’s where they lived with there family. They were running and jogging everyday getting power each day with their amazing new shoes as they were running faster everyday just like a cheetah that’s way they are called running shoes , as the winds fly through there blonde golden hair it felt smooth and nice against their neck but a tip of their hair didn’t move a bit  probably because it is lovely short hair with nice waves.



Next they walk just pass a little bird house lucy says to jenny”doesn’t birds tree goes up?” she says “ yes i think so” jenny replied so they countied to walk. As lucy and jenny coutied to wander they pass off something it was a dead tree with a lot of broken brunches but the we giant and huge they tried to get the brunch down so it won’t drop on someone but it did...BANG drop the brunch on jenny tummy she was terrified and scared she didn't know what to do but lucy was the only one to call for help so she runs and runs to get calling on her phone. So lucy got one bar on her phone so she calls 911 for help” hello how can i help you”

“ um can you help my sister she got caught under a brunch she is really hurt”

“ where are you two”

“Um we are at the hampton woods 247 parking”

“ we are coming in a hurry don’t”

“Ok bye thank”



Lucy runs back to her sister she trys her best to get her sister out but she could get a tip of the brunch off she was really worry as soon she hears a noise that was really loud she goes and checks and it was the help she got they lift the brunch off with a really strong rope and flip the brunch off.



Lucy was free and thanks her sister a millions time for all the hard work she did so they so were thinking we should find something safer to walk in they laugh happily ever weird day.

speech

Kia ora my name is hiria i am 10 years old i created this piece of work on my on. My inquiry question was
“what would happen if the moon was gone?”

One thing that would be affected is the tides. The tides would get much smaller because there would be no gravitational pull from the moon, but there would still be a small tide because of the gravity from the sun.

what would happen to the seasons if the moon was gone? There would still be seasons because the moon doesn’t make seasons.

FOR THE LITTLE KIDS does anybody know what seasons are? If you don’t it is when the weather changes to hot to cold it turning into seasons like summer or winter and that. also the earth without no moon  will orbit and rotate wobbly and for us we will be bouncing everywhere. I hope you enjoy hard work of achievement have fun learning everything I learnt thank you for listening.

Sunday 1 July 2018

specks marks


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
You have to put them before and then the end.
How to put in other punctuation
You put the question mark before the last speck mark.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 or more people are talking if one person is talking you keep on talking.
Different words for ‘said’
Reponed,replied,questioned,asked,says,happily said,mubled,gasped,yelled,shouted,told,yells,explained and repeated
Adding adverbs
Respond politely, asked politely,scream mad.

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.]
“How was your day?”asked lily

“It was fantastic” reliped hiria

“How about you?” says hiria

“My day was fine thank you” replied lily

“What are you going to do today ?” asked hiria

“I am going to learn about science” happily said lily

“How created of you lily ”said hiria

“Thank you for saying that”lily repiled

THE NEXT DAY:

“What did  you do in the weekend?”  asked lily

“I spended they weekends with my dad at my house” responded Hiria

“Well that sure would be a relaxing weekend” Lily replied back”

“Not really my brothers were really bad on the weekends it was not relaxing”hiria in a unstoppable talk

“Well it seem like  you should just find a quiet place to relax” respond Lily


“ no way that going to happen my house is filled with my nosie family”said hiria

“Well Hiria you could just enjoy the fresh breeze and have a silent moment”

“That sounds amazing that for a little bit of advice thanks” happily said hiria

“Thank you for saying that Hiria” happily replied Lily


“ You are always welcome” replied hiria

“You are so nice to say that” Lily respond in happiness

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