Monday, 30 April 2018

WAL about all the different clouds

This is my word of the different types of clouds one is the highest which is cirrus
 which is like a paintbrush, ice crystals and it is 5k. cumulus is little rain, fairweather,fluffy and sunny  day. stratus is white/grey, lot of clouds and rain. cumulonimbus is rain + snow, look fluffy and has thunder, lighting, storms and tornadces.

Sunday, 29 April 2018

WAL where rain comes from


This is a video of what happen and what we did in the the experiment and what happen to the cloud when it's is full.

Wednesday, 11 April 2018

Bean Boozled challenge!

Today in the morning on the 12th of April on Thursday at Tamaki Primary School. Miss Ashley had a plan for us to do she said “did you know how it was christmas I got a lot of sweets from Miss kormo she also gave me a jelly bean game and maybe we can play it”she example to us. So she example the game it was called Bean Boozled challenge, so Miss Ashley and room 7 had a turn each.

On round 1 Miss AShley choose someone to go first and she picked keru and he felt a bit nervous for start but as Miss Ashley shaked it.up.down.up.down.up.down. Then he got green it would be lawn or lime, but he wanted chocolate pudding which was the brown jelly beans he had a reaction which was pretty good because he didn’t get dog lawn he got lime which was good because it would be a ugly reaction towards us looking at his face. Next Miss Ashley pick someone else to come up which was lopi he says “ I don’t want boggers” he says to Miss Ashley So Miss shaked it and lopi pick one up fast and it was white it would be spoiled milk or coconut and he started to eat it, his reaction was...bad he had the ugly look on his face and he only could taste was spoiled milk that wouldn’t been yucky and bad to eat so he just spit it out into the bin.

After lopi bad reaction it was someone time to taste a jelly bean and it was Michel. He got up and he was a bit shocked to get a bad one but saw a bit excited, Miss Ashley shaked hard as she can and pop out a green which be grass or lime it might be a bad reaction to his face. He chew.chew.chew. Then he got a weird reaction saying it was sweet too sweet but it took a wild for him to taste and it was...GRASS!!! “Yuck yuck” he said with a weird voice like he was going to barf. Then it was time for another person to come up which was Tipene he was waited for Miss to finish shaking the jelly beans so he pick one which was the colour green and he tasted it again.again.again. He got barf which was yucky i wouldn’t want that he felt yuck he didn’t like it at all.
Miss ashley pick Dywane for the next one and she waiting as well for Miss ashley to shake and so pick her own and the colour was brown and she hope she can get caramel corn but she got something else which was... liquorice which she like but it smelt like it but it didn’t taste like it, it was coffee but it wasn’t on the list because we could smell her health which smelled like coffee which yuck I didn’t like coffee it was just bad smell maybe taste but I know that wouldn’t been nice to taste.


At the end I didn’t want to end I really liked the game it was fun but not when i get the bad ones it just bad tasting to do but at the the same time i had fun but not when we had to write a story about it.

Tuesday, 10 April 2018

hard words from my story

WAL: about the history of the commonwealth games

This is information about the commonwealth games like what was their first name and where they played and what year that played in things like that it is important information about the commonwealth games.

pasticing correcting our own work

Crossing the bridge


On Saturday the 16th of March 1852, there was a farmer and her brown and white cow. The farmer’s name was called Peaches.They were on their farm in Auckland they decided to sale all there milk by a market.

First the farmer Peaches got her cow and tried to get the cow to move come on Bessie.” She said as she was struggling to pull bessie. Peaches grabbed her coins and she went to William Johnsen the toll keeper. She gave william johnson 1 coin for her and 1 for her cow.

“Evening Johnson” she said as she was waiting to cross the bridge”.

William Johnson took the money and said “thank you very much,enjoy your day.” William Johnson used his strength to turn the winch”. That the farmer could go through the bridge and go to the market. The farmer and the cow got to the market . The farmer got the bucket and milked the cow like it was cleaning the cow, to sell the milk to the villagers.

The farmer looked and looked to see if anyone was coming to get some milk. But then she saw one person in line to see if it tasted nice. So she gave the nice lady some milk and she said .WOOPHE.”!!!, that's the best milk i've ever tasted.” So she bought some milk Then took it to her kids and they shared the milk together. After she left she told everyone about the milk and there was a whole line of people waiting to get some milk. Then he got to the last person and there was no one else in the line. So she packed up all her stuff and took her cow home. Then they got home and they jumped straight on to their beds and went to sleep.



Recount checklist ✓✓✓✓✓✓✓✓
Surface features
Searched
Found
Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
Capital ‘I’
NO

Capital letters for names of places and people
Full stops at the end of a sentence
Speech marks when people are talking
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘

Words are written in past tense

Connectives - next, then, afterwards

Interesting and difficult adjectives

Deep features



Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how

Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt

Ideas/events in the right order

3 paragraphs

Metaphors and similes
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex