Tuesday, 3 July 2018

sister to help

Brainstorm of ideas - two people having a walk in the woods and hiking

Describing character/setting - short hair yellow and pink shirts running shoes

Ideas for the problem - one of them get stuck under a big brunch

Ideas for the solution - the sister went to get help

Start here:  on the weekends on one lovely day in the hot boiling sun there were lovely two woman strolling through the woods their names were lucy and jenny they had another sister penny but she had things to do on the weekends

First as they entered the clear happy amazed woods in hampton that’s where they lived with there family. They were running and jogging everyday getting power each day with their amazing new shoes as they were running faster everyday just like a cheetah that’s way they are called running shoes , as the winds fly through there blonde golden hair it felt smooth and nice against their neck but a tip of their hair didn’t move a bit  probably because it is lovely short hair with nice waves.

Next they walk just pass a little bird house lucy says to jenny”doesn’t birds tree goes up?” she says “ yes i think so” jenny replied so they countied to walk. As lucy and jenny coutied to wander they pass off something it was a dead tree with a lot of broken brunches but the we giant and huge they tried to get the brunch down so it won’t drop on someone but it did...BANG drop the brunch on jenny tummy she was terrified and scared she didn't know what to do but lucy was the only one to call for help so she runs and runs to get calling on her phone. So lucy got one bar on her phone so she calls 911 for help” hello how can i help you”

“ um can you help my sister she got caught under a brunch she is really hurt”

“ where are you two”

“Um we are at the hampton woods 247 parking”

“ we are coming in a hurry don’t”

“Ok bye thank”

Lucy runs back to her sister she trys her best to get her sister out but she could get a tip of the brunch off she was really worry as soon she hears a noise that was really loud she goes and checks and it was the help she got they lift the brunch off with a really strong rope and flip the brunch off.

Lucy was free and thanks her sister a millions time for all the hard work she did so they so were thinking we should find something safer to walk in they laugh happily ever weird day.


Kia ora my name is hiria i am 10 years old i created this piece of work on my on. My inquiry question was
“what would happen if the moon was gone?”

One thing that would be affected is the tides. The tides would get much smaller because there would be no gravitational pull from the moon, but there would still be a small tide because of the gravity from the sun.

what would happen to the seasons if the moon was gone? There would still be seasons because the moon doesn’t make seasons.

FOR THE LITTLE KIDS does anybody know what seasons are? If you don’t it is when the weather changes to hot to cold it turning into seasons like summer or winter and that. also the earth without no moon  will orbit and rotate wobbly and for us we will be bouncing everywhere. I hope you enjoy hard work of achievement have fun learning everything I learnt thank you for listening.

Sunday, 1 July 2018

specks marks

Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
You have to put them before and then the end.
How to put in other punctuation
You put the question mark before the last speck mark.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 or more people are talking if one person is talking you keep on talking.
Different words for ‘said’
Reponed,replied,questioned,asked,says,happily said,mubled,gasped,yelled,shouted,told,yells,explained and repeated
Adding adverbs
Respond politely, asked politely,scream mad.

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

“How was your day?”asked lily

“It was fantastic” reliped hiria

“How about you?” says hiria

“My day was fine thank you” replied lily

“What are you going to do today ?” asked hiria

“I am going to learn about science” happily said lily

“How created of you lily ”said hiria

“Thank you for saying that”lily repiled


“What did  you do in the weekend?”  asked lily

“I spended they weekends with my dad at my house” responded Hiria

“Well that sure would be a relaxing weekend” Lily replied back”

“Not really my brothers were really bad on the weekends it was not relaxing”hiria in a unstoppable talk

“Well it seem like  you should just find a quiet place to relax” respond Lily

“ no way that going to happen my house is filled with my nosie family”said hiria

“Well Hiria you could just enjoy the fresh breeze and have a silent moment”

“That sounds amazing that for a little bit of advice thanks” happily said hiria

“Thank you for saying that Hiria” happily replied Lily

“ You are always welcome” replied hiria

“You are so nice to say that” Lily respond in happiness

maths present

Thursday, 28 June 2018


me and room 7 learn how to play twinkle twinkle and this old man it is really cool to learning other things also music and i learned tinkle the most i think i am good at that one.

waterfall jumpoff

There was a  man really brave man he was going for a jump off the waterfall but he was safe he had a rope to hold him so he wouldn’t fall down he was just brave.

john he was really old but only 46 years old he was really strong for that kind of age he always jumped off the waterfall it is his favorite thing to do all the time but the  first thing was his family he loved his family he is not with them because they hate jumping off the waterfall but it didn’t stop john doing the thing he lovesImage result for a man jumping off the waterfall.

as he went for his 2th turn he tie the rope really hard but he thinks that...but when he goes off the edge the rope suddenly appears to be half rip the john didn't go all the way down he was in the air hanging like a monkey he was really terrified in his life he never thought this will happen will it never happen to him he didn't know what to do. john was yelling and yelling for help"HELP HELP!!" but no one came but he scream his hardest he just wanted to get off.

 then suddenly two couples were walking down to jump too and they saw john so they went to help there was no time to call someone for help so they pull him up but the rope was breaking dso they had to hope the rip so he won't fall when they pull him up so they pulled and pulled and pulled the were halfway there at they got him they pulled him up and he had big cut so they had to hold the bleed cut with a hanky so if will stop but as long john was safe he is brave also brave to be hanging like a monkey.

he thanks them like crazy like he was so excited which he is because of the couples he didn't know them all there names but he thinks of them as family, helpers and amazing people.

WALT:write detailed descriptions of setting and characters