Wednesday, 15 August 2018

cross country

today tamaki primary school went to cross country at bailey road when i was up the year 6 girls i was really really nervous but i tried my best and give it 100% it was amazed
i was proud of me and alyssa we stick together we waited for each other and it was amazing we got though the whole thing without stopping it was so cool i will never ever forget that day .

i meet my friend hope at bailey road because she goes there i was happy it was amazing

Monday, 13 August 2018

poems

EARTHQUAKES
Shake
it shakes from the  ground
Tectonic plates are moving
The earthquake is huge
quake

FLOODS
Flood
Floods are dangerous
Big flood makes houses fall down
You can die from it

wave

tsunami work

How you know when the Tsunami. Is coming it’s when you see. The Water going backwards. And then coming forward. And when it is coming forward it has a lot of power. To bust down houses. And Energy but if you are very far away you got heaps of time to run or you could just run up the mountain or drive a car up the mountain. And sometimes when you are very far the water will go lower and lower like just say that if you are in christchurch and they had a tsunami and if it was coming to Ackland sometime the water goes High then it goes low and when the water goes low that means that the water is losing its energy.




The people are planning for the future so they have everything and they will be safe from the tsunami that could hit them but if there house are stronger and also stronger than the tsunami. People don't have time to get ready because ,they are close to the sea which makes the tsunami much closer to them and they have no time to plan for safely they are to close they have to make time to find a big hill to go on because if you find a tall hill that is taller than the tsunami it would hit you but you will have no time if you have near the water which the tsunami comes. The other people are lucky because as the wave goes it lose it power and strongness and it just a little one and does nothing.

Tuesday, 7 August 2018

earthquakes

as it says the richter scale rates or measure how big the earthquakes was.
this means like they are like together and one is apart they are called the oceanic plate and they are continental plates.

Thursday, 2 August 2018

disussion diretor

volcanoes

Volcanoes are really hot they can reach around 2,120 c%. Volcanoes shots ou lava from the bottom of the volcanoes.

What are volcanoes made of and what is volcanoes
Volcanoes are made of what called magma that what forms the volcanoes. It also forms lava and ash clouds. Volcanoes are a type of hill or a mountain filled with lava and magma. It has liquor and gas in the volcanoes which is lava.

What are the different kind of volcanoes
Composite, shield  and dome. Composite is known as stratovolcanoes, and it is form of layers of ash and lava flows. Shield volcanoes are really low with gently sloping sides and form of layers of lava. Shield volcanoes are produced fast flowing fluid of lava that can flow for many miles.
Dome volcanoes have much steeper sides than shield volcanoes. This is because the lava is thick and sticky

What is the ring of fire and why is it important?
They ring fire is a string of volcanoes and sites of seismic activity or earthquakes around the edges of the pacific ocean.the ring is dotted with 75% of all active volcanoes on earth.

Volcanoes are really dangerous and there are different layers like lava and rocks also magma and did you know that the ring is dotted with 75% volcanoes on earth . dome volcanoes lava is really sticky and thick.

Thursday, 26 July 2018

story

The first thing that happens:   Liam was in his room getting ready for bed and suddenly the chair was shaking ? what do you do?

A)Go to  the annoying ghost on the chair  B) don’t to the annoying ghosty go back to bed

The ghost goes  comes into the room and Liam could see him on the chair that he wanted to come to the annoying Ghost. What do you do?

The next morning the Ghost tried to make friends with Liam but liam was happy to be friends with a ghost.

That morning Liam didn’t made friends with the Ghost so he just went back to sleep.

When Liam was still sleeping he let the Ghost creep up on him so that he is not frightened but really brave

When Liam recognized the Ghost he straight away ran down stairs to make loud noises until the Ghost went away.

Liam let the Ghost chase him around the house everywhere that he made a mess but he actually didn't know.

Liam run on the stairs and yelled so hard that the ghost could ran away and never come back, while he was yelling he was happy that he could have a good night sleep from stop the ghost for only 2 days.





choose your own story plan

summariser

Tuesday, 24 July 2018

weather conditions

this is about what make,hails wind,thunder,clear clouds and rain

JACK STORY

JACK AMAZING STORY

Once upon a time in far away forest in a little rusty cabin lived a little boy named jack he was about 17 years old with a amazing personality which was filled with helpful feelings towards everyone even bullies he didn’t care.

So jack was actually living by himself but he could manage taking care of himself he was tough and brave, one story that he always thinks about was his parents his parent he had a big heart towards them they were like angels to him he loved them with all his heart but one day when he was 10 years old his parent had actually go into a car crash a really bad one that was not really good they actually got really bad pains inside their body they had a lot of broken bone they had no time to go to the hospital and get help they were past as soon as they crash.
Jack hate’s thinking about his parent it gives him nightmare and he is 17 years old now but he was actually 10 years old when he had to start looking after him but he also could manage himself even though he was 10 years old.

One boiling day jack thought of going for a walk inside the woods. He wanted to get some fresh air just for a moment so he can get his head though of all that thinking about his parents.
As jack was continued to stroll down the woods he could hear someone screaming really badly and look like they needed help so he yell back to get direction where they were “WHERE ARE YOU!?” shouted jack he got a reponseed and it sounded like a girl so he ran where her voice was coming from.
He was rushing so badly he stop for a break and a lucky break he stop where the girl was and the best part was for jack was she was kind of his age but 16 years old that what she told him he,he was making goo goo eyes at her as she was stick to underneath a tree”ARE YOU GOING TO HELP ME?!”she yelled in pain “ok what your name?”
“Hmm my name is janie” “what a nice name my name is jack” “ ok nice to know can you help me” so jack tried to look and call for help she was losing her oxygen in her body as she  underneath the tree.

So he tried to find help but it was not used so he tried to to get the tree off.
He counted to 3 to get ready janie was falling a sleep and that somethings is a bad sign.
So he left up the tree and left above his head feeling like his parent help him and they did in his amazing life he tucked the tree away from janie and she was lighting up and that was a good sign she was breathing fine and she was walking fine too and she was ok and amazing.
Janie could talk to “thank you so much i own you so badly” “your welcome” “ i should give you something you want, so what do you want?” “ hmm a kiss” “ ok” really “ yeah” so janie and jack kiss then something happen jack fanited before he could kiss janie so janie walk off as soon as he fainted haha she was funny.

Monday, 23 July 2018

the weathers are made of what ?

this is the 3 weather and they are temperature, moisture and air pressure

layers in the atmosphere

theses are the 5 layers in the atmosphere troposphere and that is where we are on the ground and planes fly in that layer too, stratosphere planes also planes fly in that layer too, mesosphere, thermosphere satellites only and exosphere and comets and asteroids

Sunday, 22 July 2018

a good day becoming a bad day

One sunny day there were three little kids and  there was two lovely girls named luci and london and they had a little brother, a little ant named johnny and they called him john for short. They lived in a little village with their parent john and sarah the best parents ever.

John, london and luci were really lovely kids they loved to help people in anyway because they loving and lived to be kind and helpful mostly were  they got that from, from there amazing parent john and sarah they had the in mind to they loved to help people they were angels they tswere heaven that is on earth right now there kids loved and hearted  them some much they were the best parents in the world. One day the kids parent had to go to this big meeting for there work they needed a job for the food and clothes to pay for so they had to go they there parent ask the kids if”can you guys managed? And look after yourself ” there father asked “ of course we can managed” replied luci so john and sarah rush off.

The kids did know what to do so they just called some friends maybe around 2 friends for a little talk but it wasn't a talk it was something much bigger… they invited there wholes friends to there house they we actually wild and crazy kids like they need to go to the zoo to be teached your not a animals but maybe they are. So john, luci and london was so shocked they didn't know what to do for the party so they just dance and you know what and made a mess as the kids london, john and luci they knew it was getting out of hand as they lost their fun they actually told the kids to leave but the kids didn't accept to leave so the conited to dance and make a big big big mess. As london is panicking luci has a idea why they are making a big mess so fast it because they were around like 5 to 6 what a big blow they knew that it was a good day becoming a bad day. So they thinked “what should we do? What should we do?” they questioned themself they were pancing so badly.


John was just a little ant but he knew what he could do he actually go all the candy he could find in his stack which had a lot of lollies a lot so he grab a sack to put the lollies in and said to all the crazy “ look i have lollies, do you want some? If you want some come and catch me” he shouted at the kids for them to hear, they chase him down the road where they were no near the house so he drop they bag and ran and the kids didn't care they were stuck to the lollies  john thinks about the kids “their going to have a sugar rush “ john laughed . so he ran back house with smile on his face he needed to give up his lollies before mommy comes because everytime they do something bad the the parent always look in the rooms and see what they can take away for a week he couldn't of go in trouble for having lollies but he gave away so no way he can get in trouble for that.



“THANKS JOHN”said london and luci
“Your welcome guys”
So they justed clean up the house real fast before the meeting finished and then complete the mission and all they did was sleep all day and the parents came back from the meeting and they saw there angels so the decided to have a sleep as well from there long day but they didn’t know how their kids long day with hahaha.
THE END



Tuesday, 3 July 2018

sister to help




Brainstorm of ideas - two people having a walk in the woods and hiking



Describing character/setting - short hair yellow and pink shirts running shoes



Ideas for the problem - one of them get stuck under a big brunch



Ideas for the solution - the sister went to get help



Start here:  on the weekends on one lovely day in the hot boiling sun there were lovely two woman strolling through the woods their names were lucy and jenny they had another sister penny but she had things to do on the weekends



First as they entered the clear happy amazed woods in hampton that’s where they lived with there family. They were running and jogging everyday getting power each day with their amazing new shoes as they were running faster everyday just like a cheetah that’s way they are called running shoes , as the winds fly through there blonde golden hair it felt smooth and nice against their neck but a tip of their hair didn’t move a bit  probably because it is lovely short hair with nice waves.



Next they walk just pass a little bird house lucy says to jenny”doesn’t birds tree goes up?” she says “ yes i think so” jenny replied so they countied to walk. As lucy and jenny coutied to wander they pass off something it was a dead tree with a lot of broken brunches but the we giant and huge they tried to get the brunch down so it won’t drop on someone but it did...BANG drop the brunch on jenny tummy she was terrified and scared she didn't know what to do but lucy was the only one to call for help so she runs and runs to get calling on her phone. So lucy got one bar on her phone so she calls 911 for help” hello how can i help you”

“ um can you help my sister she got caught under a brunch she is really hurt”

“ where are you two”

“Um we are at the hampton woods 247 parking”

“ we are coming in a hurry don’t”

“Ok bye thank”



Lucy runs back to her sister she trys her best to get her sister out but she could get a tip of the brunch off she was really worry as soon she hears a noise that was really loud she goes and checks and it was the help she got they lift the brunch off with a really strong rope and flip the brunch off.



Lucy was free and thanks her sister a millions time for all the hard work she did so they so were thinking we should find something safer to walk in they laugh happily ever weird day.

speech

Kia ora my name is hiria i am 10 years old i created this piece of work on my on. My inquiry question was
“what would happen if the moon was gone?”

One thing that would be affected is the tides. The tides would get much smaller because there would be no gravitational pull from the moon, but there would still be a small tide because of the gravity from the sun.

what would happen to the seasons if the moon was gone? There would still be seasons because the moon doesn’t make seasons.

FOR THE LITTLE KIDS does anybody know what seasons are? If you don’t it is when the weather changes to hot to cold it turning into seasons like summer or winter and that. also the earth without no moon  will orbit and rotate wobbly and for us we will be bouncing everywhere. I hope you enjoy hard work of achievement have fun learning everything I learnt thank you for listening.

Sunday, 1 July 2018

specks marks


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
You have to put them before and then the end.
How to put in other punctuation
You put the question mark before the last speck mark.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 or more people are talking if one person is talking you keep on talking.
Different words for ‘said’
Reponed,replied,questioned,asked,says,happily said,mubled,gasped,yelled,shouted,told,yells,explained and repeated
Adding adverbs
Respond politely, asked politely,scream mad.

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.]
“How was your day?”asked lily

“It was fantastic” reliped hiria

“How about you?” says hiria

“My day was fine thank you” replied lily

“What are you going to do today ?” asked hiria

“I am going to learn about science” happily said lily

“How created of you lily ”said hiria

“Thank you for saying that”lily repiled

THE NEXT DAY:

“What did  you do in the weekend?”  asked lily

“I spended they weekends with my dad at my house” responded Hiria

“Well that sure would be a relaxing weekend” Lily replied back”

“Not really my brothers were really bad on the weekends it was not relaxing”hiria in a unstoppable talk

“Well it seem like  you should just find a quiet place to relax” respond Lily


“ no way that going to happen my house is filled with my nosie family”said hiria

“Well Hiria you could just enjoy the fresh breeze and have a silent moment”

“That sounds amazing that for a little bit of advice thanks” happily said hiria

“Thank you for saying that Hiria” happily replied Lily


“ You are always welcome” replied hiria

“You are so nice to say that” Lily respond in happiness

maths present

Thursday, 28 June 2018

music

me and room 7 learn how to play twinkle twinkle and this old man it is really cool to learning other things also music and i learned tinkle the most i think i am good at that one.

waterfall jumpoff



There was a  man really brave man he was going for a jump off the waterfall but he was safe he had a rope to hold him so he wouldn’t fall down he was just brave.

john he was really old but only 46 years old he was really strong for that kind of age he always jumped off the waterfall it is his favorite thing to do all the time but the  first thing was his family he loved his family he is not with them because they hate jumping off the waterfall but it didn’t stop john doing the thing he lovesImage result for a man jumping off the waterfall.


as he went for his 2th turn he tie the rope really hard but he thinks that...but when he goes off the edge the rope suddenly appears to be half rip the john didn't go all the way down he was in the air hanging like a monkey he was really terrified in his life he never thought this will happen will it never happen to him he didn't know what to do. john was yelling and yelling for help"HELP HELP!!" but no one came but he scream his hardest he just wanted to get off.

 then suddenly two couples were walking down to jump too and they saw john so they went to help there was no time to call someone for help so they pull him up but the rope was breaking dso they had to hope the rip so he won't fall when they pull him up so they pulled and pulled and pulled the were halfway there at they got him they pulled him up and he had big cut so they had to hold the bleed cut with a hanky so if will stop but as long john was safe he is brave also brave to be hanging like a monkey.

he thanks them like crazy like he was so excited which he is because of the couples he didn't know them all there names but he thinks of them as family, helpers and amazing people.


WALT:write detailed descriptions of setting and characters

HIRIA & VINA descriptive language examples

Wednesday, 27 June 2018

twinkle twinkle star colours

postcards in space

creepy story of a little girl

One creepy rainy day a little 9 years girl named susan was roaming into the scary woods with a creepy maze inside the scary woods, she lived in a creepy haunted house with her family and she walks to her school and back to home with only one leg. She has only one leg because she loves climbing trees she fell out of the tree and had a massive cut on your upper leg it wasn’t strong to hold so they had to cut her leg off.

Sasan wasn’t a  bright kid she loves black for dark inside of her she felt lovely all the time at home because her parents arent home all the time they always went out she was the only kid so she was alone. Sasan had problems to sleep every night time she had a lots of problems.

southern cross

NO escape

this is answer about the black hole i read a book called no escape

Monday, 25 June 2018

The story of there is always help on the way


Brainstorm of ideas:

Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,


See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,


smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking




PEOPLE/SETTING

PROBLEM

SOLUTION

Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,

Car crash

A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service

No glasses so couldn’t see

injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts

Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.

On the phone

Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.

Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.

Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.







Title:

The story of there is always help on the way.

Intro

2 sentences

One lovely day on a hot boiling day a tall fancy oldley man big jack he was in his fancy car even though he is 60 years old he saw can hit it with cool style. As the old man drives along the road suddenly a weird noise upon his ears “ boom”  he thinks to himself “what if i ran over something” but he thought it was nothing so he continued to drive.

Orientation 5-10 sentences

WHEN

WHO

WHAT

WHERE

WHY

HOW

CHARACTERS

Big Jack was on the motorway going to hampton on friday 8.30 in the morning in new zealand, he was going to hampton to visit his kids which they are around 20,23,19 years old all grown up but it didn’t stop him to see his kids he was excited. Big jack is really smart because he is a inverted but retired 10 years ago but he was saw amazing at it so he made something for his car it was a gas fuel so when he ran out of gas the gas goes up and keeps on running so he doesn’t need to stop to get gas something else amazing to the food he has a line of food in his car that he can eat so he doesn’t need to stop at the shop to get food or anything, but when he needs to go toilet he has to stop of all the water and food he going to eat as he taking a trip of fun and excitement.

Problem

5-10 sentences

As he took the exit to hampton something really bad happen he drop his glasses so he couldn’t see where he was going so he reach down to pick up his glasses but the problem he couldn’t see where his glasses were then suddenly...a massive huge large crash happen he hit  pole really hard a made a big flip like you do one on a trampoline but worst then that it involves someone getting hurt and that really no good. Big jack blackout for awhile as he he woke up he was paranoid he didn’t know what was happen he was upside down and hurt his legs had cuts all around his legs in fact they were hairy but he was hurt he couldn’t get his seatbelt off it was stuck around him he was shaking he was frustrated feeling he couldn’t breathe he didn’t like being a little crash place but as he is worried about something bad maybe will happen he thinks in is low head”maybe it is because my glasses fell off and he  wasn’t looking because he didn’t have his glasses on his eyes but somehow someone came for help and calls the ambulance, police and fire service so they can help him who was lucy she was  only 18 years old in her car.

Solution

5-10 sentences

So the policeman and everybody else came to help. The police use there huge as scissors to cut open the door to free out Big Jack from the seat before the cars catch on fire. The policeman grabs his scissors but it was a machine so when he press the button and the door appears to open but they saw had to get the seatbelt off Big Jack

So they use the scissors to cut open the seat belt and jack why free but couldn’t move so they move him to the ambulance to ge a check up to get him better but after he left he says” thanks  lucy for everything” she did to help him she was glad he was ok

Conclusion

Less than 5 sentences

After all that crash but they cheer jack up with a little party in the room so he doesn’t have to miss driving and his kids and home but the good news instead of him visiting his kids they visited him he was evicted.

The magican's elephant

On a hot boiling day Peter was at the market to get some food  - fish and bread then at the top of the corner of his eye he saw a sign near a tent that you can hear the truth about your life but he needed the money for the food so he  was standing right outside the tent  with his nervous face feeling shy to walk right in there.





 Peter was looking afraid all over his face showing a shocked face.









 As Peter was standing right outside the tent he was thinking should I spend the money on the food or the truth -  he decided he should and deciding the consequences if he goes and hear the truth but he looked a bit interested to enter so he agreed with his guts  - he should go in the tent but his heart said no go use the money to buy the food.









 Peter entered the tent and the woman says to him” you may hear the truth with a dollar to hand me” she explained to Peter with anxious face. Peter was shocked - on top of her lungs - her voice shouting across the room with screams out her body.

Wednesday, 20 June 2018

Room 7 Co-constructed narrative

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative
Labels: writing


House on fire
Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming
Put the fire out with water hosesImage result for fire house
Smoke is strong
Problem - there might be people inside?!
PS4 is still inside. - valuables
Clothes are inside.
Might be cats or dogs inside
Food is inside
Playing with matches
Fireplace
Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.
Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.


Title
Fire in the house
Introduction
One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation
Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem
Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution
Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion
The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

Monday, 18 June 2018

goldilock zone

catholic bruno boiii

Catholic bruno boiiii
What does the church believe?
He believed the earth soul

How did they observe the universe?
Telescope and with
rocket ship.

What tools did they use?
Telescope

Why didn’t the church agree with them?
Because they didn’t agree and believed in other earth and heavens.

What happen to them?
He got burned alive.