PLANNING FOR WRITING.
INTRODUCTION:
WHAT: partner yoga challenge
WHERE: inside Room 7
WHEN: Monday 17th September 2018, in the morning, first thing in the morning
WHO: Room 7 students
WHY: have fun
HOW: miss had a slideshow, kids in partners.
KEYWORDS
- Flexible, splits, lift, push, hold yourself up, hold hands, clasp hands, grip, hips, shoulders, balance, fall, collapse, tumble, flattened,
PARAGRAPH 1:
- Roll, got into partners, move the furniture away,
- Miss explained what we were doing
- First pose - easy, happy, going to get harder, confused, confident, trust and feel comfortable with partner
PARAGRAPH 2:
- Challenging
- Making shapes with our bodies
- Keeping calm, trying your best
- Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
- Which ones were really HARD?
PARAGRAPH 3:
- Most complex or difficult poses..
- Which ones did you try AND FAIL?
- Which ones were really HARD?
CONCLUSION:
- My favourite one was..
- The hardest one was...
On monday 17th of September in room 7 the students/room7 did a special activity and it was the partner yoga challenge that some of the kids from this class did last year with Miss Ashley. We did it because it was for fun and Miss Ashley had it on a slideshow and she cast it to the tv.
The partner yoga challenge wasn’t the first thing we did. The first thing we did was doing the roll,getting into partners, moving the furniture away so that they could get some more space. I wasn’t doing it because there were no more partners so Miss Ashley said that I could be the photographer. What I saw was that I started off easy and then started to get harder and harder.the more it got harder the less people that were went to do it.
Author: Syraiah-lee
Checked by: Hiria
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