tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4506289806511301976.post7388467556374316515..comments2019-09-18T18:22:37.979-07:00Comments on Hiria @ Tamaki Primary School: Three kidsTPSBlogOwner4http://www.blogger.com/profile/00541767221376341453noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4506289806511301976.post-61468952386967649672016-09-18T13:44:34.604-07:002016-09-18T13:44:34.604-07:00My goodness Hiria, your stories just get better an...My goodness Hiria, your stories just get better and better! You have used paragraphs, lots of details, lots of powerful words and you have dialogue at the beginning - awesome! You have been working very hard in the past few weeks to improve your writing. I am so proud of you!Ashley Schellingerhout (Miss Ashley)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10885496821769466351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4506289806511301976.post-72362399353022385592016-09-15T00:43:24.714-07:002016-09-15T00:43:24.714-07:00i like your story writing hiria it has detail awes...i like your story writing hiria it has detail awesomeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10301473083339178545noreply@blogger.com