Monday, 25 June 2018

The story of there is always help on the way


Brainstorm of ideas:

Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,


See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,


smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking




PEOPLE/SETTING

PROBLEM

SOLUTION

Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,

Car crash

A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service

No glasses so couldn’t see

injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts

Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.

On the phone

Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.

Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.

Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.







Title:

The story of there is always help on the way.

Intro

2 sentences

One lovely day on a hot boiling day a tall fancy oldley man big jack he was in his fancy car even though he is 60 years old he saw can hit it with cool style. As the old man drives along the road suddenly a weird noise upon his ears “ boom”  he thinks to himself “what if i ran over something” but he thought it was nothing so he continued to drive.

Orientation 5-10 sentences

WHEN

WHO

WHAT

WHERE

WHY

HOW

CHARACTERS

Big Jack was on the motorway going to hampton on friday 8.30 in the morning in new zealand, he was going to hampton to visit his kids which they are around 20,23,19 years old all grown up but it didn’t stop him to see his kids he was excited. Big jack is really smart because he is a inverted but retired 10 years ago but he was saw amazing at it so he made something for his car it was a gas fuel so when he ran out of gas the gas goes up and keeps on running so he doesn’t need to stop to get gas something else amazing to the food he has a line of food in his car that he can eat so he doesn’t need to stop at the shop to get food or anything, but when he needs to go toilet he has to stop of all the water and food he going to eat as he taking a trip of fun and excitement.

Problem

5-10 sentences

As he took the exit to hampton something really bad happen he drop his glasses so he couldn’t see where he was going so he reach down to pick up his glasses but the problem he couldn’t see where his glasses were then suddenly...a massive huge large crash happen he hit  pole really hard a made a big flip like you do one on a trampoline but worst then that it involves someone getting hurt and that really no good. Big jack blackout for awhile as he he woke up he was paranoid he didn’t know what was happen he was upside down and hurt his legs had cuts all around his legs in fact they were hairy but he was hurt he couldn’t get his seatbelt off it was stuck around him he was shaking he was frustrated feeling he couldn’t breathe he didn’t like being a little crash place but as he is worried about something bad maybe will happen he thinks in is low head”maybe it is because my glasses fell off and he  wasn’t looking because he didn’t have his glasses on his eyes but somehow someone came for help and calls the ambulance, police and fire service so they can help him who was lucy she was  only 18 years old in her car.

Solution

5-10 sentences

So the policeman and everybody else came to help. The police use there huge as scissors to cut open the door to free out Big Jack from the seat before the cars catch on fire. The policeman grabs his scissors but it was a machine so when he press the button and the door appears to open but they saw had to get the seatbelt off Big Jack

So they use the scissors to cut open the seat belt and jack why free but couldn’t move so they move him to the ambulance to ge a check up to get him better but after he left he says” thanks  lucy for everything” she did to help him she was glad he was ok

Conclusion

Less than 5 sentences

After all that crash but they cheer jack up with a little party in the room so he doesn’t have to miss driving and his kids and home but the good news instead of him visiting his kids they visited him he was evicted.

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