Tuesday, 13 March 2018

fancy ladies recount

One sunny day on the 14th of december 1852 me and the beautiful ladies. First ladies was Mary she had brown hair and brown eyes that was nice and pretty,the next lady was Beth she had black hair with brown hair, then there is Maryjane who had brown hair and brown eyes, then there’s Jane that had soft smooth brown hair with brown eyes, and me luci I had blonde hair with green eyes who ways the most nicest person i will say. Me and the bestest were living in a small pink and white house in panmure, We were heading out to go buy some dresses for the ball.

First we ate our breakfast with had egg, bacon and toast “yummy”said Mary Jane. We all walked toward the first panmure bridge called the swing bridge we walked with our 1 cents in our hands giving it to the toll keeper called williams johnson his was really kind he was a really good toll keeper, Williams johnson he open the bridge for us went waited a bit but it was ok then finally it open to we past going toward parakanga dress shop i was so excited.

Me and the ladies we made it to the dress shop bursting to have fun with the dresses. Mary and us got our dresses in set to be wear for the ball there were all pink with white roses on top that was a top fancy design idea it looks pretty on us even when Mary wears it she look top stuff. We got to the ball to have some fun we enter the big huge ball with shiny lights around. We all dance together as we swig around around from left. Right. Left. right.we had fun we had some cocktails with grapes on top which was yummy I love it but the ball was closing so We headed back home.

We got to the panmure bridge and pay for each of us to get across a slide across gently going home for the night to have some amazing dinner. We all step into our house and Mary started to cook some fried rice with eggs on top it was fantastical.

The ball was amazing I had a lot of fun and the girls we had fun with each other together dancing as we eat and drink wine what a beautiful day to go for and fun adventures.

1 comment:

  1. What a great recount Hiria! I love how you have really thought about what a Fencible lady would have looked like, worn and done with her time back in 1842. You have also got good structure to your writing so it makes sense and your ideas flow together. Next time just remember to reread it out loud to yourself and check if you take breaths in the places you have put your full stops. Keep it up!