Should phone be allowed in school

I think that phones should be in school because we can communication with their parents and they can call their parents if they need help or if they forgot something.Because you can take photos of your work and miss Ashley doesn't have to take it and you can do it yourself.I think that phones should be allowed in school because you can use your phone if you have no netbook.

First paragraph:

O	I think that phones should be in school because that if there teachers phones don’t work and yours do you can ring your parents for something and help.
R	I feel that   you have to have for communications with parents for emergency and you are telling your parents for help and if you forgot something. you can use your phone for everything important,also on the other hand if your phones is working and the office and teachers phones is not working you can use your phone.
E	Like when we were going sailing faka’ata he forgot his togs so be got to call his parents for help so she can bring his togs so he go sailing.
O	I think that phones should be in school because that if there teachers phones don’t work and yours do you can ring your parents for something and help.

Second paragraph:

O	I think that you can take photos of your work and miss Ashley doesn't have to take it and you can do it yourself.
R	It would be a lot easier if you take all your photo instead of miss ashley so she doesn't have to get tired on it and you can but on your blog and miss ashley can but it on the class blog.
E	When i took my photo of my work it was lot easier because that it good that we do it because just that we can put all the photos on and miss can put a bit on the class blog.
O	I think that you can take photos of your work and miss Ashley doesn't have to take it and you can do it yourself.

Third paragraph:

O	I think that phones should be allowed in school because you can use your phone if you have no netbook.
R	A reason is you can work on your phone and you can take photos of your work to blog it on your blog.
E	For example if your netbook breaks down you can continue work on your phone
O	I think that phones should be allowed in school because you can use your phone if you have no netbook.

Conclusion:

Summarise the 3 ideas	We think phone should be allowed in school because it helps with communication,learning and safety.we could use them as netbooks,and teachers won’t need to worry cause it is safe
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