My spelling Words.
Spelling was little hard ,boring, the worst time but i like the spelling test but it long to write and it 100 words to write but i like to learn different words.
In the classroom 20/2/17 we were doing a spelling test to see what you up to.the classroom was doing the test plus me,what we had to do was mrs was calling the words and we had to spell the word upto 100 box.
The spelling test was hard, little easy, it was fast also a little slow because of the talking a lot,it was messing my words and it was created spelling words to me.
Spelling it for learning if i said it boring but it not boring some people it can be because you know the words it easy for you and you can write 100 words fast it can be difficult for people.
Spelling it for learning if i said it boring but it not boring some people it can be because you know the words it easy for you and you can write 100 words fast it can be difficult for people.
I felt in the spelling nervous, frustrated like i can do it no more, joyful for my words,
i felt awful because it didn’t no how to spell the word, ill because it seen i could not do it also i felt scared to get the words wrong and it felt difficult.
Great feelings Hiria - also great paragraphs. You have got the who/what/when/why/who/where part and your story is in chronological order.
ReplyDeleteNext steps - adding more detail about what was happening. For example, instead of saying 'we had to spell the word', you could say 'I thought about the word, it rolled around in my head, and my hand magically began scribbling out the letters N-E-T, before I even realised I was writing!'.
Hi Hiria,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your recount about our spelling test, you could improve by using capital letters, putting your punctuation in the right places,and proof reading to make sure your sentences make sense. Anyways you done a great job. Keep up the good work!
Hi Hiria,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your recount about our spelling test, you could improve by using capital letters, putting your punctuation in the right places,and proof reading to make sure your sentences make sense. Anyways you done a great job. Keep up the good work!