Tuesday, 20 September 2016

The wedding

"wow you done a good job said "lucy and she love when her dress is shiny in the sun also she think that she is going to have a good wedding. Lucy fought that her dress is like a marshmallow and it like it make out of snow.

The wedding started she got wired she said she love him but she said that she does not love she started to cry and ran away into the woods for a long time.Lucy didn't know what to do so she just kept on running.Lucy stop and had a rest then she fought wrong but she saw didn't go back.

Lucy was sleeping she woke up and heard someone and i was her husband she didn't believe it she felt so happy that he came all this way to find me so she fought that she will marry him so they did they felt happy together.

1 comment:

  1. You have used smilies! Woohoo! And paragraphs! Amazing! I LOVE LOVE LOVE your ending - how romantic. Its like a fairytale!

    Hiria, we need to work on your tenses.. Do you remember we talked about writing things in past, present and future tense? Like I ran, I am running, I will run.
    You have changed a little bit throughout your writing so I'm getting a bit confused.

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